The Promise

The Promise

A Poem by Daniela
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This poem is deticated to my boyfriend...He give's me the most insparation. Andy, I love you no matter what happen's in life..

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He promised her that she would never be harmed

He promised her that she was the only one.

He promised that he would never let her go,

and he swore that he loved her so.

He told her that nothing but love

could stand in their way,

and nothing but the truth he will always say.

He'd always speak of laying in the sand,

as they held eachother close

hand in hand.

She'd look him in the eyes

as he'd sing her a song,

and she knew that nothing would ever be wrong.

But most of all,

he promised her his heart

and together they came up with a new start.

He gave her his love

and she gave him hers in return,

and like the flame of a candle

their love will forever burn.

© 2008 Daniela


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A beautiful poem. Flowed like good music. Thank you. A pleasure to read.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago


truly a romantic soul

Posted 16 Years Ago


I wrote this Poem for my love of my life...he give's me so much insperation for all of my newest writing.
Thank You Hun for being there for me. Ti amo, amore mio.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2008
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Daniela
Daniela

mahopac, NY



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