doesn't

was expirementing with words one night and i got this

It doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem

doesn't have to be a house to be a home

 

Dont need laughs to make a joke funny

don't need the sun to make a day sunny

 

Nor steel to make something strong

or rain to make a day long

 

Don't need a stick to make give someone pain

don't need to be crazy to be insane

 

In order to fly, you don't have to be a bird

alot can be said without saying a word

 

 

Author's Note

i don't know if i'm quite finished with it yet . . . . . . .

Reviews

[Anonymous]

Holy Apollo in the Heavens... Powerful stuff. I can't even put my love for this poem into a review that means much. I really enjoyed this piece! Keep up the great work!

[Ki]

This is REALLY great. Fabulous attitude my dear. Really nice... Awesome rhyming. You've completely mastered that.

[kelly]

thanx alexis. i like it to but i feel like its not fully done. any ideas?

[Alexis]

I like this poem, Kelly! :D