Butterflies

Butterflies
Fluttering around a deep red rose
Your heart
Sing the songs written on it
Touching softly with their
Colourful wings, some special corners
Creating a wondrous sensation
Magical
Like flying between
Colourful clouds of fantasy

Reviews

[Lily Finch]

WOwwww...amazing..... I never thought like that....how beautiful it is...full of fantasy....brilliant...saved to favourites :)....Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece

[Emily]

I've never thought of a butterflies in this way. Well done!

[M.K. Jawdat]

thanks a lot

[Kasey Miriam]

Very nice piece. lovely work.

[M.K. Jawdat]

thanks a lot

[Einstein Noodle]

very original ...butterfly winging up against ones heart ... very descriptive ... i felt the flutters run down my arms ... really like this elegantly stated concise poem ... nice job
E.

[Fire Mage Andrea]

Lovely. This poem's not just about butterflies, but love and romance too.
Nature poems always go down well. They're one of my favourites to read and write - apart from the fantasy ones.
"Colourful clouds of fantasy" & "Fluttering around a deep red rose" - my two favourite lines in this piece of work

[M.K. Jawdat]

thank you . . . .

[Zahra]

I think it's cute . . . . . . . . . . . . .

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poetry. I like the poetry that uses nature, butterflies and the clouds. You have it all in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[M.K. Jawdat]

Thank you . . . . . . . .

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your poetry. Filled with dreams, real life and story.