just on the spot

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so im not sure what to write about,
the computers or whichever,
the beautiful librarian?
im o just write what comes to mind.

so my eyes are now burning,
i've been staring at the screen for too long,
i think i may need water,
but my feet feel weak.

this man beside me looks scary,
he doesnt know im writing about him,
opps he just turned,
i wanna run.

she walks like a palm tree,
all straight upwards,
i wonder if she bear palms?
or she hasnt started having as yet.

well in anytime now.
i may have to go,
so im writing about,
thats what came to mind

Author's Note

i was just blank and i writed as it came along

Reviews

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

man u've got good imagination don't take it fro granted and becareful with your diction, "you wrote " not writed..

[everton ellis]

yea my mistake.thank u for the review

[Sami Khalil]

A good write. Thank you for sharing...:)....................