Lovely Compositions

 

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She sat there,
Right there,
For this was her room,
She locked herself in her room,
In fear of exactly what had happened,
At that point the one thing that kept her hanging on,
Was that lovely composition of songs he made,
For her,
She loved them,
She felt the songs understood her,
She detached and listened,
And she did so everyday,
But one day something was different, wrong,
The notes lost their ring and became flat,
The words lost their meanings and became lies,
She panicked and checked all of the other compositions,
It was all the same,
They were all the same,
She had lost hope,
Just as the songs lost importance,
She had lost trust,
Just as he lied to her.

Reviews

[Rima]

I like it... like Ruth said, it started out sweet and lovey but 'she' then realized he was lying to her. It's sad some relationships are like that... anyway, great job!

[ruth]

another great poem, in the beginning it seemed it was going to be like a happy lovely story,but in the end he had lied to her all along...
thanks for sharing
-ruth