a nitemare of a devil !

a nitemare of a devil !

A Story by graynuss

today i went 2 the park 2 meet a freind , i saw nice cloud shape's like 1 lookd like a tee pot !! i thouht i was dreamin !! but then my freind calld my name & i new i was awake , she had a new bracelt on , it was so full of diffrent charm's even one jewl. then we went 2 starbuck's bcuz we luuurv frapp's !! but my mom calld me on my cell she said i had 2 come home for food
so i walked home sadly jenny was sad 2 but wen i was walkin i got scard cuz there it was quiet late , the shadow's were scarey i didnt no wat time it was !! i felt like i was dreamin agen but then my mom calld again she came to meet me , while i was waitin there was a big shadow it lookd like a devil !! the end !

© 2012 graynuss


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graynuss
this is a real thing which happend 2 me !! not a lie !! let me no what u think review nice pleeeeeese

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I liked this story....Shadows can be very scary....Good write.....Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 28, 2012
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hello im mackenzie im 15 years yung, i go 2 church evry sunday & sumtimes other day's with my mom, i like poems & sunsets too, and myy fave music, 2 listn 2, is justin bieber im a beliber, luv it o.. more..

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