MORE THAN ACTIONS...

More than actions,

We were the perfect match.

No longer the time,

Your smile was a bright blessing.

More than actions,

I gave you a chance.

You never care nevertheless,

I was your only hope.

More than actions,

You were cutting my wings.

You were toxic,

I was lost.

More than actions,

We knew we couldn't be together.

It was a big mess,

But our love was there no matter what.

More than actions,

I need you here... with me.

My pain and my joy,

I miss you more and more every single day.  

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems, dialogue or word orders...

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

The throws of a somewhat difficult relationship shine here. It’s almost a yin and yang situation. The truth behind this though is that on one note you can’t live in a negative one sided world but the second part to it is....love takes over our deepest thoughts and emotions.

[Alexandra G.]

Exactly! Our emotions are beyond strong... thanks so much for your kind review!

[Coyote Poetry]

When someone excite our mind and heart. We need them close. I liked the honest tone in the words. Thank you Alexandra for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Alexandra G.]

Thanks so much for your review and your thoughtful words...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Alexandra.

[R.E. Ray]

Such a common dilemma in relationships. We can’t live happily with their presence or their absence. It’s two extreme seasons we can’t seem to endure. Well said here.

[Alexandra G.]

Indeed! Thanks so much for your review... Blessings!

[Sami Khalil]

Actions speak louder than words. More than actions requires a lot of sacrifice. I feel the bitter truth in this relationship. Wonderful layout of thoughts...

[Alexandra G.]

Thank you Sami, always learning from the biggest ones yet...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome to