Infinity Lake

3/10/09

 

I am

caught some where

between

                                here

                and                        there.

Love is a     pow a full

    thing.

that vast lake you see

                                and know that it will

be there              that you drown

because

                    something that             expansive

can not be anything other than

engulfing.

                                a fate that you                  know

you’d dive into

                for nothing

                                repeat nothing

could feel better than knowing

you’ve been swallowed by infinity.

 

Reviews

[run vs remember]

Nicely written. I definitely like the form.

[Jon Cooper]

I like it very much :]

I love this:
"a fate that you know

you'd dive into

for nothing"

Awesome job :]