Frozen

Frozen

A Poem by Rachel DeHart

can I crawl back into the
         car with you
find our time warp
        and stay there too
everything fell apart
         you see
        and my arm isn't as
                 strong as me.
breathing hurts, an my
        fingers bleed
I am not ready yet
         to leave
please forgive these
        stupid tears
I've been trying so hard now,
        lying for years
[my body is young
        but my soul is aged]
you lay claim that I'm perfect
        and shamelessly I blush
yet I've never felt as beautiful
        as I do under your touch

© 2009 Rachel DeHart


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i love this so much. the emotions are just really beautiful, this mixture of pleasure and sadness...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! It's got elements of happiness and sadness.

I really liked
"[my body is young
but my soul is aged] "

I like how it fits, yet it isn't part of the pattern so much...it's really awesome.

This one's really good.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rachel DeHart
Rachel DeHart

Falls Church, VA



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