Go ahead.

So. Go ahead.

                Come in here.                   Please.

                just fill up my room with your

                voice yelling.

Over power my already too loud music with

everything you think I’ve been doing

                wrong.

 

Its okay. You can hate me.

                                I agree full heartedly.

                I am definitely a waste

      of your 9 months bearing me.

 

Reviews

[Samith Pich]

interesting. strong. visually it works really well in it's free-form. I think it's 'bearing' you're trying to get at. I think the second last line of 'I am most deffinately' could work just as strong with ' I was deffinately'. or not.

no, no, this is good!

thanks for sharing

[Parker Pearl]

thank you for this.

really.

i love the bite behind the words in this piece. its like all of the things you wish you would have/could have said.

but rest assured...
you're no waste.
you've got a gift, and i am so glad you are using it.
:)