Just, breathe.

I can

not breath.

I haven’t

                cried like

this before

 

with sobs ripping through me.

I keep trying to

                                breathe.

 

Keep trying to

                                inhale

Only to feel like

the hole in my chest is

                expanding.

I can not

hold on to anything

                tight enough

I am ripping to shreds.

There is this                        emptiness

                a spot growing

and gnawing.

And seeing your comment.

                I could                  

                                HEAR

your voice in my head.

How irrational is

                                that?

But I could just...

I can see you... see how you

smile     when your

                                nervous.

How       your

nose always                       moves

                a little when you

                                talk.

 

And I am drowning in this.

 

I just.

                Where is the numbness

that I had worked

                                SO

                hard on?

 

Reviews

[MagicHearted Knight]

This is some amazing writing. It is truly the stuff of published writer's potential. It is as if I can hear you speaking, so real, so much pain, the words so powerful, I feel the hurt and sense of suffocation. This is such a moving piece of poetry. Once again your abilities and style take captive the reader and bring them on the journey along side you. I am honored to know you.

[Brian 'Yeti' Fields]

This is amazing. I can picture the tears and broken sentences because of them. This truly inspires and reaches to anyone who has gone through any type of questioned break up.