Just... you.

Just... you.

A Poem by Rachel DeHart
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Something short about an ex-girlfriend whom I miss dearly...

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I remember ignoring all the rules, and kissing you,
right after getting two new holes in my face.
I remember the way you’d freeze up and
catch your breath when we were close enough..
I just.. I can still smell your hair glue if I
think about it. There is this nag in the
center of my chest for you. If it was possible,
I’d go as far back as I could, and erase me
from your life if that could make you happy.
I just want you to know, that hurting you
was the furthest thing from my mind. And
if I could do anything, I’d do it for you.

 

 

© 2008 Rachel DeHart


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This made me tear up, it's really emotional. Your feelings are clearly expressed in this and I think that's what makes a great poem.
Nice job, and keep up the good work,
~Lauren

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on August 13, 2008

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Rachel DeHart
Rachel DeHart

Falls Church, VA



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