Mutual Disturbances

Mutual disturbances;

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The darkness enters invades, corrodes, swamps

feeling, in a torrent of black wave

drowns self and being

drowns brain and brawn, and the

tiny island called hope on the blurred

blunted horizon slips beneath

the deep deep blues,

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     " We have come for you, friend, brother,

     lover, we have come to claim what we have 

     always owned, we have come for you, "

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with shark - like intensity

I bite, I fight, I swim into the shadows

            bared teeth and 

anger /

            the attitude of the damned

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I hear the whisper in the under flow

the current dragging me deeper and darker

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     " there is no papillon's raft of

     coconut dreams, no happy horizon

     no new born day no life jacket of jasmine,

     we are here for you, with you, 

     are you, 

we are here for your comfort and joy

support, 

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( and will kill you in your sleep )

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 and we have thrown away

      the key    heeheehee

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A smile spreads like rainbow leaves

caught in the  ... /    air

damp and autumnal the kiss of a 

crisp sharp wind, uncaring and vengeful

willing and wild

laughter echoes across the deserted park

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     "hahafuckingha,

     O deary, deary me, 

     you mean to say ; you're locked inside

with me,  ah, yes, "

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          let the fun begin

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

bad trip for sure gram! your hero has found out a truth too late it seems .. we play .. we pay ... there really is a Heaven and Hell says i; but i think we are all going to be surprised one way or another .. i see demons coming to take what is theirs ... our lives, our actions have consequences .. those who choose to live in disregard of that surely can and will loose their soul ...for those who don't know they have one .. doubly shocked and the anger and the
"I bite, I fight, I swim into the shadows
bared teeth and
anger /
the attitude of the damned" will consume ... all the coulda wouldas .. seeing what is lost .. Dante's inferno without a doubt says i! vivid story telling my friend .. super important theme in my world anyway ... wishing you the best always .. and thank you for sharing .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

[gram linski]

hey Mr E thanks as always for your great insightful review, aye that duality of angel /devil whispering in your ear, you are a wise man, I hope you are keeping well, thanks again, for your continued support,

[Robert Haigh]

A dark and desolate write, but a poetic and inventive one! We all have our demons to face, whether we carry them with us, or whether they catch up with us later!