The Soundgarden of Delights

The soundgarden of delights

kicking chaos around the furniture,

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destroying destruction with a

sudden un-stamp of sullen boot

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carving riots into the wind

screaming hellfire mute sound

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       shards of unsmashed mirrors

scatter the ground

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reflecting the bite of

        br

           oken diamond night

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hoarse laughter barked from throat

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               animal eyes

                 intensify

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unhinged doors bumping / banging

                                  clouded dark cloud

     scuffed testament to brok

                                             en toe

                                    

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moonhowl gaggling

                 giggling indentations

      scavenging  noise into feral ( ear ) drums

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the kicked chaos - form   - 

slumped and beaten

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             stretches         yawns

              creaks his old time bones

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" Right ya cheeky f****r,

         Let's try that one again, "

     

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The sound garden of delights, is far removed from its name. You use the word chaos twice, as if once wasn't enough. Where is this place I ask myself? Could it be gram's local on a Saturday night? Or maybe any city centre where too much booze fuels an almighty fire. Anyways, I won't be planning a visit anytime soon :)

Chris

[gram linski]

thanks for the review, Chris the situation was more inner than out er in the pubs haha, you should try it some time, appreciate your time and kind words,

[Davey Payne]

Kicking chaos around the furniture......brilliant stuff Gram. Structure is awesome and I love your turn of phrase

[gram linski]

thanks Davey, I'm sure you know the feeling haha

[John the Baptist]

Shades of Kristallnacht here. One can almost see the SS men wreaking havoc without restraint. On the other hand, it could just as easily be the US Capitol last January 6th.

[gram linski]

aye Kristallnacht indeed, John, thanks for reading and enjoying, it could apply to most places at any time,

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is paradoxical genius....
excuse me while I stretch, yawn and creak...
and that poor brok
en toe.
j.

[gram linski]

thanks, j. I always enjoy your poemette reviews, appreciate your reading my nonsense, it means a lot, take care,

[barleygirl]

OK! You've thrown down the Halloween gauntlet here, my friend! This is summa the most unique spooky writing I've seen so far this season. I love the subtlety and yet done with screaming descriptives. I envy your loosey-goosey way with words (((HUGS)))

[gram linski]

Hey Margie glad you enjoyed this one, looosey goosey and screaming descriptives do sort of sum me up aye, haha, thanks as always for your time