The View from a Dream

The View from a Dream;

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 - a rose,

cumulus cloud faces

wind blown features, drifting

across azure soaked skies

the theft of reality

                             unravelling

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in time, in time, 

a buzz of chaos

     of pollination

                 re      generation

-

a halo of light

                            and dive and swim

in the soft sonic cushion

               of a dolphins grin

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deep in the shadow of night

in the cloak of nefarious remains

     a slight hint of guilt

a sliver of steel sharpened intentions

a rainbow of auras dancing primary

numbers

melting to lilac, lavender scented

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     view from a rose -

                               -  a dream

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a god - like blue that escapes the senses

that escape I reach for

yearn for, ( bleed ),

the tear drops of Angels

quench thirst and quell thoughts

and dissolve in the dawn

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grey fog - grey colors bled, shimmering, shape shifting

 - cloud - like - smoke - like ,shape shifting,

only rays of sunlight showing  blue spirals,

thermals, waiting for

    tiny vultures to appear and dis ....

                          ( carrion )

and minute shadows created the rose

and the rose created the dream

and the dream

                       ( sweating, moaning, )

             ( screAMED, and screamed, ) screams

and flower yields to the gentle

     seduction of sun

                                 sun

                                        sun

spreading her butterfly petals of  fun

                                                               fun

                                                    fun.

Done.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WHOA! That was a complete trip around the sun. At first, I was relating the sensations of losing one's tethers, becuz that's how life often feels to me these days. But then your poem turns a corner into a more sensual direction, a vivid & seering account of how it can feel to be immersed in one's passion (((HUGS)))

[gram linski]

glad you enjoyed, Margie, always enjoy your comments take care,

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Beautiful piece here...I wonder....do we really create the dream or does the dream create us?
and is there a little bit of rose in everyone?
j.

[gram linski]

astute as ever, my learned friend, who dreams the dream, together we will dream dreams others can only dream about, with the scent of a rose, thanks as always for your kind word, j. always appreciate your time and fine mind

[Coyote Poetry]

My dear friend. I had to read the poem a few times. You made the words dance to perfection and meaningful meaning. I loved the complete poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[gram linski]

glad you enjoyed, Coyote, you were a big influence on me when I joined the cafe, so I'm glad you're still reading, appreciate the review

[Coyote Poetry]

I am glad and I enjoyed your work my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

love the look of your free form ....daydreaming no matter how lofty and pleasant seems to be susceptible to grey doubts and fears ... looking to tear down the dream .. we are human after all ... and there is a reality in the hard rocks of life ... really enjoyed the imaging and scents in this one .. gotta mention:
"a halo of light
and dive and swim
in the soft sonic cushion
of a dolphins grin" .... kills me! surprise steamy closing says i! afternoon delight in the morning it seems ;) nice work all around in my opinion ...
E.

[gram linski]

hey, E, how are you keeping, thanks for the great review, aye you have nailed all the salient points, including the last couple of lines, haha, thanks for reading, and enjoying, , class review, says I take care, over there, thanks again for your time

[Einstein Noodle]

absolutely gram! I'm good thank you and wish you the best every day. I'm in a big slump without even the desire to be mused for months now .. i bought an old Ford F100 (1963) and it is keeping me rejuvenated .. great read my friend!

[Chris Shaw]

Felt exhilaration here gram. A dream of Paradise. Intoxicating in its beauty. However dreams don't last and there is always the negative which has to find a way in to spoil it all. Yes, the smoke gets in the way. Shapes change. Happiness doesn't hang around before the mood changes. You stirred the senses here with this intriguing write.


Chris

[gram linski]

thanks for the great review, Chris, the view from a dream can be intoxicating, glad you enjoyed, intriguing as in wtf ? haha, hope you are keeping well,