You start out with a belligerent & sassy attitude, depicting ghosts in ways I never would've imagined. The height of originality, as I enjoy in all your writing. But again I'm surprised when you turn the corner into a more introspective & philosophical pondering (after that raucous opening), possibly showing that ghosts are mere portals into whatever madness already exists within the mind (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
introspective and philosophical pondering, is how I used to class my poetry, haha, no f****r believe.. read moreintrospective and philosophical pondering, is how I used to class my poetry, haha, no f****r believed me so I'm glad you recognise that trait in my writing, Margie, always enjoy what you see in the mad rambles of me, lol,
You start out with a belligerent & sassy attitude, depicting ghosts in ways I never would've imagined. The height of originality, as I enjoy in all your writing. But again I'm surprised when you turn the corner into a more introspective & philosophical pondering (after that raucous opening), possibly showing that ghosts are mere portals into whatever madness already exists within the mind (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
introspective and philosophical pondering, is how I used to class my poetry, haha, no f****r believe.. read moreintrospective and philosophical pondering, is how I used to class my poetry, haha, no f****r believed me so I'm glad you recognise that trait in my writing, Margie, always enjoy what you see in the mad rambles of me, lol,
This is fantastic. There are ghost out there. They come in the ofr of lost loved ones in our heart. To find then we have to no further then our heartbeat.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
aye you are right, Cowboy, look no further than your onw heart for the ghosts of our past loves, app.. read moreaye you are right, Cowboy, look no further than your onw heart for the ghosts of our past loves, appreciate the review
Each time I read your poetry Gram, I am paused in awe! This is magnificent, as always. You have such a wonderful talent of description and metaphor, superb :) The more we gaze into the known and unknown, we do find those ghosts like to roam within and without :) I absolutely love this piece :)
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
thanks for the great review, Ruth, glad you enjoyed, you should give the prompt poem idea a go, doe.. read morethanks for the great review, Ruth, glad you enjoyed, you should give the prompt poem idea a go, doesn't have to be ghosts can be anything imaginable, always appreciate your thoughts, take care,
Caged In An Animal's Mind
Caged in an animal's mind;
No wish to be more or else
Than I am; a smile and a grief
Of breath that thinks with its blood,
Yet straining despite; unsure
In my stir .. more..