Sounds,ounds, ounds, ounds,

a collaboration between Eilis and the minstrel gram (Eilis wrote all the best lines,)

There is more to the mind than this

mute geometry,

Sounds, ounds, ounds, ounds,

                                              drip

                                          drip

                                                          drip

                          leaking

memories, the fallen  and the

                       chosen

deciding/undecided/which is best

worst, frozen

Aphrodite shattered on sight

and shot at Dawn, clay

pigeon /shattered bone,

curling themselves into a restless

apiary of memories, the fallen

 and chosen

meeting the ague echo

of distant shells, discharging

at Dawn

in the shadow of a headless

Aphrodite;

singing

sounds, ounds, ounds, ounds,

                                                  drip

                                           drip

                                                           drip

there

is more to this mind than the 

                          geometry mute

72 degree trapeziums  in my brain

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I think I might be in a different galaxy, but your collaboration makes me wish I could find the one you two are in! *wink! wink!* I love how this does not feel as if written by two people. I can see how you two would meld in many natural ways, when it comes to the way you each do your magic with words! I don't know what the hell any of this means, but it makes me want to giggle & be free (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[gram linski]

lol, giggle away and be free, Margie, glad you enjoyed, not quite sure of the meaning myself, Eilis will give a thoughtful insightful comment

[barleygirl]

Nobody on this website gives more thoughtful & thorough examinations! *wink! wink!*

[gram linski]

lol, my sphincter just slammed shut and my prostate gland just winked, wink, wink,

[Robert Trakofler]

This makes all of the sense in the world... every time I try to reassemble aphrodite she ends up as a trapezoid! But it begs the question why I always feel the compunction to shoot her in the first place cause she isn't really a trapezoid at all? Well I can't make heads or tales of my thoughts most of the time too why should I allow the stricture of my structure to stop me now:) You guys should be careful when cowriting no telling what could happen to the molecular structure of the universe

[gram linski]

haha, thanks B, some great mind magic musings tripping tickle teased tongue, Implosion and Annihilation, I would like to think, lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

excellent duo you guys make...the math here is one and one makes a better one.
it is like two muses fighting, then reconciling, then becoming best friends...
two minds melding ---love "meeting the argue echo"
that is a priceless line...
and what an image that gives us.
j.

[gram linski]

thanks, j. glad you liked it, always appreciate your fine reviews, needless to say but that was an Eilis, line, obviously, lol