I have the utmost envy & reverence for poets who rip their guts out as you've described. Your poem imparts the authenticity of your sentiments. I love made up words & "mindfuckery" tops the charts! I love how the title & final couplet loop it all into a tropical wind chime (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
thanks Margie, is minfuckery a made up word, I'm sure I've read that somewhere before, possibly havi.. read morethanks Margie, is minfuckery a made up word, I'm sure I've read that somewhere before, possibly having flashbacks from my own writing,
5 Years Ago
Googling . . . I see mindfuckery is in the urban dictionary, but not the "official" one, so it's bec.. read moreGoogling . . . I see mindfuckery is in the urban dictionary, but not the "official" one, so it's becoming a real word, I guess! In the process I uncovered "bullshittery" which truly must be used in a poem at once! *wink! winK!*
i hurt just reading the "ripping poetry from / your guts, with a/ fetid sharpened claw"
powerful...
and the last for lines...
i like the blend of sex and poetry here...two themes coming together, one allegorical the other literal...
damn good stuff.
j.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
thanks j. pretty much described any Henry Miller book, a simple homage to a great writer
Caged In An Animal's Mind
Caged in an animal's mind;
No wish to be more or else
Than I am; a smile and a grief
Of breath that thinks with its blood,
Yet straining despite; unsure
In my stir .. more..