I'm gone

I left

But what can I do now?

Now that I have my freedom?

Nothing

 

I’m lost

Can you help me?

Help me find my way?

You can’t

 

I’m dying

But do you care?

Do you save me?

No

 

I’m gone

Yet my presence still lingers

Can you feel me?

Of course not

 

 

Reviews

[piggy]

a bit sad, much like a thin piece of paper laying in a puddle.

[soulsearching]

I could relate to this! I love it...so true.

[Emunah June.]

There's both a hopeful and sad tone to this. It makes you wonder how the speaker is really feeling. Like are they hopeful of a brighter future? Or are they too sad to look towards the light? Such confliction makes a great write. Thanks for sharing!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sad yet lovely!

[XxGothicDollsxX]

OMG!!! Luvvv ittttt