Gone were the days

Thinking about my childhood and my friends during those stage of my life.

Gone were the days

 

We used to be so happy,

Yes, nothing to worry,

We used to run away,

On places we’d like to stay.

 

We used to sing along,

With tune so high and strong,

We used to gazed at stars,

And think about the mars.

 

But now we’re here apart,

Not knowing where to start,

I cling to our memories,

And today I reminisce.

 

-gracedamores

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes I do understand the lines below.
"But now we’re here apart,
Not knowing where to start,
I cling to our memories,
And today I reminisce."
kind and sweet memories are never forgotten. Thank you Gracee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you very much. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Gracee.

[Another Relic]

Very nice to read and sad too.

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you. Yes, it's a story of two friends who parted ways and keep chasing everything about life. :)

[PoemWriter]

I like reading poems that rhyme like this one and it's short as well. I would maybe write in the introduction something like:

We used to run away
And find some place to stay

and also in the second stanza

We used to gaze at stars
especially at mars

Just a suggestion from my side, but might not be what you had in mind. But I really like the way it rhymes.

[Gracee Amores]

Oh! Thank you. That would be great too. :)