Silhouette

Silhouette

 

Standing on the midst of a wilderness,

Anxious of things that already exist,

Shattered mind with a heavy heart,

A soul’s awake yet torn apart.

 

A Silhouette glance in a shaded avenue,

Her senses break and then she knew,

A crossroad lane is just a dream,

And eyes begin to tear like stream. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Sort of a mystery and you took the reader with you into thoughts and places.
"Her senses break and then she knew,
A crossroad lane is just a dream,"
I liked the above lines. Thank you Gracee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Gracee.

[Comewhatevermay]

Such a touching realization. Beautiful.

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you. :)

[Haiku Lover]

Really heartfelt poem ❤️ rhythm is really nice

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you for your appreciation :)

[Jade]

this is really good, I like how it all is in sync. flows nicely

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you :)

[Hanah Gotski]

8 lines yet your thought gets conveyed perfectly through the poem!

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you :)