There for You

   I'll be there for you

Even in your darkest hour

      As you lay dying

Author's Note

Tried another senryu (my favorite type). Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[diana pollin]

Will respond short l'y...Did you get a peek at my story?

[GPR]

Yes, and it was really good :)

[diana pollin]

What's a senryu? A Japanese poetic form? You display a lot of delicacy and refinement in your poetry. I particulary liked the longer one I don't want you to stay and thought it could be set to music. You have optimally worked together the intermingling currents of love and frustration with the overtones of perfection which is first undefinable, or rather, too immensely and subjectively definable as everyone has his version of perfection that is some silly yardstick in selecting a soulmate "tethered" (I like that) to a quest for sanity, which is an interesting way of looking at love, not as a gift or a revelation, but as a tie to what we can only define as a reality then necessarily fraught with one's imperfections. A subtle weave. Thanks for the sharing. Please forgive the lack of numerical ratings, I cannot get used to it, yet Best of luck, Diana

[GPR]

Thank you for the review :)

[daninstockholm]

the power of words can be sometimes found in brevity, as this reveals so very well.

[GPR]

Thank you :D

[Elodie Thompson]

The words contain plenty of emotion which can grasp one's attention. You did a great job with it.

[GPR]

Thank you :)

[Elodie Thompson]

No worries, it was very well written. You should definitely write some more.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I've had people that I felt this way about, and there is no greater feeling than to know someone else cares that much about you, too. I'm glad you posted this, I like it. :)

[GPR]

Thank you :)

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a testament of love and or friendship...we all want someone to be there when we are in the final moments of this life... well-done

[GPR]

Thank you :)

[jb3]

This is my favorite of the three you have posted. It says nothing, but contains everything. Simple and precise, it conveys the deepest emotion and desire one can hold for another. I like it!

[GPR]

Thank you :)