He is the Grim Reaper

A description of how i imagine Grim Reaper to be....!!

In a black robe covering all cruelity inside,

Carrying long blood bathed blade on his side,

Riding the horse of darkness, eyes full of conceit

Gazing from above, the WORLD bows at his feet

A sight of him infuriates, stops your breath

Vicious, Deceitful, the metaphor of death

Killing his time, singing the rune

Life is the instrument, death is his tune

Reviews

[Hasan Hersi]

Really enjoyed that! I love the imagery put in with the blood and black. The gothic part of the grim reaper is seen by the harsh sounding words you use!

[HungryGhost]

absolutely lovely. The poem flowed very nicely indeed.

[MomzillaNC]

Really great poem. Nice, strong meter.

I think in the second line you meant "blood bathed blade"

[Gozeta Ritesh]

thank ...very much...my very first review...i will definitely change it..."bathed"

[MomzillaNC]

You're very welcome.

[Gozeta Ritesh]

plz ....review my others as well...
Actually i'm very excited...