look at her

tell me what you see

do you see her

or do you just let her be

if you really just look at her

you would know why

she goes to school every day

and cry

she cry because she cuts her self

and feels like she is all alone 

all because of her father

and his forceful tone

he beats her everyday

and also every night

and yet there is nothing she can say

he tells her she is stupid 

and also calls her names'

but she is " okay "

even after he makes her plays " some games "

her father is a sick man

but she still love him so

what else can she say

when already tried " no "

he got her pregnant

and made her sad

all he could ask was " what happen "

and he beat her again

because he was so mad 

with in days 

she hated her life

all because of her father 

and his sick mind

so she is dead tonight because 

he took her with a knife

why didnt you look at her

GOSH what could you have seen

what a wonderful person she was

at only fifteen

Author's Note

i tried really hard to make a sad poem for a contest so tell me what you think please thank you

Reviews

[Jess Diaz]

this is really lovely.

[serenity]

thank u

[Steven Cash]

omg this is a great poem

I mean, the subject matter isn't great but the writing is

you remind me of my friend Maria. She writes about stuff like that.

[serenity]

i like writing stuff like this to it is pretty fun and also getting people heart in your writing

[Richard Lane]

What you wrote there Serenity is well done and haunting to read. It definitely works for me and I like the techniques you used to help visualize the pain that the fifteen year old was going through. This will be listed in all three categories for general reading, reading and favourites on in my library as of today.

[serenity]

awwww thanks this really mean alot to me