my lase
A Poem by cloakedone
my lase is cold she had been sold when was i to be told ?
© 2015 cloakedone
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something new tell me what you think
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Had to look up the word 'lase'. My lase is hot. :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
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I know I said I would review your'e stuff, but I haven't sorry about that. However, I like your poem. I'll try to read more of you're stuff.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Nice work... like the rhyming in this one too. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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At first I found myself counting syllables to see if you had a haiku going, came up five short. Still it doesn't matter. Great transition with as few words as possible. Well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Added on May 7, 2015
Last Updated on May 7, 2015
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cloakedonehavanna, AR
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so if i told people about me what would i say? i'd say learn me through my writing ........and as you see i love my dog jean:)
What other people think of me is none of my buisness
sometimes it hu.. more..
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