12 word story (my very first)

12 word story (my very first)

A Story by cloakedone

why had the stars fallen from their thrones so high up?

© 2015 cloakedone


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cloakedone
so this was my very attempt on anything like this ,so if its bad just stop reading ok?

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very intriguing but you only have 11 words, maybe that was the intent but otherwise I like it. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cloakedone

9 Years Ago

thanks it was a long shot and i fgured out i had miscounted,but meh
My count is 11 words here..if this is also a story I would suggest you use a declarative sentence rather than the interrogative sentence used ...as you are telling a story not asking..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cloakedone

9 Years Ago

ok thanks and i miss counted,and i will keep that in mind .thanks for your help
  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

You're welcome..glad I could offer you some help..

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