Little Liar

run, run faster till your on the ledge

fight,fight till your almost dead

lie,lie till you almost reach the truth

dance,dance to the rythm of your war

breathe,breathe take in your last

wait,wait come closer to me

"little liar your fate has come to me by the stars,

nice to see you again "

shock,shock your shell is shocked

anger,anger,wrath watch your futile attempts to strike her

durge,durge there's not one for you

little liar,little liar now you can lie in my eternal fire 

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

You have written the dark in a very differnt way and this is the first time I see like this. I liked it really nicely penned.

[cloakedone]

thank you Prabha,cool name by the way.I always try to make Gothic literature different for my readers.just so it doesn't become stale and dry....but thanks

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome. Thanks you and my name means Light...

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work my friend... lots of dark tones to this piece. Liars are no fun. Good work :)

[cloakedone]

thanks and i have had more than my fair share of it