thief and treasure

i am a thief without her treasure 

justice has separated the coveted thing and me

to cold is justice ,to cold is it for me

 

it glimmers and it shines into the night without me

cold is its'  breath and still is its' nature 

to cold is justice, to cold for my treasure

for when we,me and the wondrous treasure,rejoin

a new star will be born burning out the cold justice that took my treasure from me

for now i will dispense what they so freely gave and make them wish they were in their grave

 

i am  a thief empty handed waiting for her treasure to be given back

watching ,waiting for the day of the union of treasure and me 

i am a thief waiting for her treasure rather impatiently 

 

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Its a meaningful and passionate one I liked it. Nicely penned.

[cloakedone]

thanks it was more personal than any of my others but i'm glad you like it Prabha

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[cloakedone]

well i assume this is the part where these comments disolve and we part from this?

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[cloakedone]

well till you or i review each others work again i bid you a goodbye

[Prabha Salimath]

Why you said like that??

[cloakedone]

well i thought we were done speaking ..