Summer

Captured summer feelings.

bleached sands

bright skies

lemon scent

lazy flies

soft breeze

closed eyes

sandy hair

hot nights

ice-cream parlour

tank-tops

surferboys 

flipflops

sunburnt noses

dry lips

summerlovin'

first kiss

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem as an absolute rookie teen..

Reviews

[distracted]

It is nostalgic and bright

[Elwyntreasa]

I really like how you created a poem out of just nouns and adjectives. Fragments that came together to form something beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem . Sums up the beauty of our summer times.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Like this-alot! pat