Swimmingpool Eyes

I wrote this Poem for a boyfriend.. We spent lots of time together, hanging out at a pool and generally being obsessed with each other, in a crazy, teen-y way..And, of course holding hands and cycling

Your swimmingpool blue eyes

With your golden eyelashes

And your toothpaste smile

With your lipgloss lips

And your rockstar face

With the wrinkels on your forehead

And our hands reach for each other

When we're cycling down the street

It's a fairytale love

With a happy-ending

Reviews

[Taylor Ann]

I loved this piece. Each exquisite line gives off heartfelt passion. I'm sure every person can relate with this piece. I especially enjoy the last line two lines:

It's a fairytale love
With a happy-ending

I loved it. It was written beautifully, and a joy to read.

[MR.RANDLE]

It is a cool piece and i see clearly that you was staring at the person while you was freestyling ,lol
this peace..