Anger Within

When I have hatred for people

The blood is boiling and bubbling in my heart:
I will tear you limb by limb apart.

Squeezing my fists into robust shotguns:
You'll be lucky to talk with your sons.

I'm a raging beast on a warpath:
When I finish, it will be a bloodbath.

Reviews

[Cro.Seer]

the use of short, simple words reflects a feeling of raw anger.. i love the effect.

[Mariah Jane]

This is also very well done! I enjoyed this one. The wrath in this was very evident. The rhyming was very good as well.