Everybody Just Shut Up and Dance

Play, Rewind, Play, Rewind, Play, Rewind, Play, Rewind, Stop

everybody just

bodies just dance

all.at.once

shut up n' danse

unravel un- . . .

. . . . . . -do, n'

un.do.once.more.

now you're fit, dance

velo velo VELO VELO

can you hear the muse?

sick, mew zik, mu sic, muse it

shut up n' dance-dance...

...get up n' dance-dance

get-got it, now you got it, audit

break it down

oh.my.HEAD!...                

                ...phones.SCREEM!

for.you...                              

                         ...for you to DANCE!

and love n'love n'luv n'lussss...

...lust, dance, rave, dance

love, dance, brave, dance

sick, mew zik, mu sic, muse it

can you feel the music?...

         ... music on the line            

... for.you.

to shut up and Dance!

Author's Note

Inspired by an Icelandic artist, but nothing close to her excellence.

Reviews

[Tania]

heheh enjoyed this uplifting song ..
_Beyourself

[Mai L Nissen]

Haha... I love it!

I definitely hear the music, see the dj mixing and playing ...
This is really nice:
"can you hear the muse?
sick, mew zik, mu sic, muse it"

I got a feel of some funky, jazzy house music with some disco on top - a mix... People dancing doing some wicket moves - especially to the bit I just referred to... It works really well!
Maybe I should go dancing to night! You set the mood :)

Thanks for sharing, Kyle!

[gorillarock]

dance it up! drink a beer for your Canadian friend :D

[sinNsincerity]

This is pretty neat. Gave me sort of that jazzy feeling.

[gorillarock]

That's cool! When I read it again, it's not jazz in my mind. I would love to find out how people interpret the music that isn't there; how any instruments do they hear? what kind of instruments? what is the tempo? what is the volume? all the special little tones and subtle sounds that make music so awesome!

[Ana D S M]

I can actually hear this is a song, very cool!
I am always up for a dance! Great energy here!

[gorillarock]

thank you for reading and commenting! i wondered if i would have been able to make at least a simple beat with the flow of punctuation and lines and stuff, mission accomplished :D

[Ana D S M]

You're welcome. :)
Good job!

[Jamestown]

I'm in, let's dance! Great piece, most excellent, fun, fun and more fun!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[gorillarock]

thanks for taking the time to read and comment! i had a lot of fun writing this one out and trying to make music for the reader, without music :)

[Ricky Campbell]

LETS DANCE! I love it, good write

[gorillarock]

Thank for taking the time to read and comment :) glad you enjoyed