You Can't Control Me, Lover!

A feisty villanelle

Kiss my a*s and bite my thigh

Say you, what I should act as right?

I'll slap your cheek and not say why

I can't be like some other guy

Uncommon, rare, odd, I will fight!

Kiss my a*s and bite my thigh

I'll spit, your face, your stupid eye

I hope you lose that moron sight.

I'll slap your cheek and not say why

Remove the thought, burn, make it fry

And bathe you in my mental light

Kiss my a*s and bite my thigh

We could recede, and breathe our sigh

Let's take a step to help make light

I'll slap your cheek and not say why

Just one more thing, I'd like to try

To squeeze as much out from this night

Kiss my a*s and bite my thigh

I'll slap your cheek and not say why

Author's Note

I learned what a "Villanelle" was today from another writer here, and decided to take a lighthearted approach to playing around with my own!
The structure's proper I believe, tips and help be well received.

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

Haha... I am not the right person for advice here!
But I enjoyed reading it :D

[gorillarock]

Thank you for reading! I found it very difficult to work with the villanelle structure, i'm particularly unhappy with the content in the last two stanzas haha