Crying,Dying but still trying

"Want him back"

Wantings are mine

Belongings are yours

But the time we spent

Is only for hours…

 

I loved those days

With you

That always crazed

 

I remembered those part

With you

That always blazed

 

I want to forget the past

The mistakes you made

And said, it was too fast

I want to forget that price

Which I have to pay

And will never arise

 

Why I'm not able to

Change those things

Which made me

Cry alone

Why I'm not able to

Praise those wings

Which made me

Fly swings

 

Crying for those days

When you loved me

Dying for those time

When you kissed me

Trying for those moments

When you pleased me…

 

And asking for your mistakes

Which you made me pay!!!!!!!

 

 

Author's Note

Just expressed whatever i was feeling when i wrote it....Just an expression in hardly 10 minutes.

Reviews

[Berto]

This is excellent. It's not random, it's coherent, like watching honey drip off a spoon.

[David W Moore III]

full of emotions and beautiful lines. my favorite: Why am I not able to praise those wings which made me fly... nice

[RJM]

Sweet emotions just pouring out from your soul are the most beautiful of all!

[Dream Weaver]

A brief quote from William Shakespeare; Parting is such sweet sorrow.
Sadly it doesn’t make it any easier. A emotionally driven write…

[ForTheWorld]

the emotions are well expressed..this is what i called jewel, definitely a jewel of a writer.... =D

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

well expressed emotional weeping through the poetic form~

[Cynthia]

Great Poem!
I can relate to your poem, it isn't what I've go through, but just know how it feels like.
Nice.