Tell me why????

Why it always happens with me???

Oh lord!

Oh god!

Tell me how it happens??

When you promised

To be to hold and grabbens…

 

Oh lord!

Oh god!

Tell me how it went??

When you told

It will never pant…

 

Oh lord!

Oh god!

Tell me why it has to go??

When you said

This work will show…

 

Oh lord!

Oh god!

Tell me why it crossed??

When you claimed it

To be in range…

 

We often love someone truly

Because the one we love

Is always duly…

But how did it mistaked

And caged…

 

Tell me that

Was it destined???

Or a game of your part???

 

Tell me that

Was it has to leave???

Or you made it so???

 

Tell me that

Why you changed me???

Or you wanted me to see the world???

 

Now here I lie in front of you

praying for needy greedy help

But still asking the same question,

"Why it was me????"

"Tell me why it had to be???"

Author's Note

I wrote it for myself a long time ago and have posted now.
Comments are welcomed.
:)

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

very nicely written....i can say that this poem is directly came from the bottom of your heart....here you are representing a sad situation to be in....i think blaming god for your pain your wait is not correct.i liked last para very much...keep writing:)

[JENY]

Sometimes we don’t get answers for questions like this…..
But in the long run…
Answers themselves dawn in front of us without inviting….
That is life….
Loved the way you wrote the poem…
So much…

[Prateeksha Khot]

amazing poem. really liked it

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

I can relate...

[TheOther]

The question people will always ponder: "Why me?" It has to happen to someone :) Nicely expressed and well penned.

[Coyote Poetry]

The picture made your words come alive. The little girl look like she had did many things wrong. I like the strength of each line in the poem. It is like a desperate prayer needed to be answered. The poem was strong and I like the emotion in the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I do like how you permit the reader to create around the enigmatic poetic their own scenery~ we all get backed into that corner of WHY sooner or later in life~ well written~

[Ashley]

really good. its gripping and flows well. however some parts the grammar it off and it stops the flow. but all together a really nice poem

[writercak]

good,

[Cynthia]

Oh!
That's great!!!
Love this sooooo much!