Writing

I wrote what i felt

I'm writing on my own,

Thinking of my past.

I'm drawing on my needs,

Trying to making it out.

I'm finding out the creatures,

To get into the soul.

I'm carrying all the living,

That made you think of the broad.

 

Have been through all the words

Without whom I was nothing,

I brought a panel which

Seems to create something,

I broke all the rules to

Make my way out,

And I know

I have

What I want

Getting to be penned,

I know the layout was wrong

But my thoughts made it right,

I being a human wrote what I thought

And myself posed it to someone who can "See"

 

See the world amazed at me,

See the things being showed at least,

 

I knew what was wrong

The thing made me realised

It was not kept so long…

 

I'm now in a different world

Where I can EXPRESS and

Can made it in "One"

I'm now showing the trueness

Where I can WRITE and

Can show the "Light".

Author's Note

I wrote it just now and wanted to add.
I wrote what just came out of my mind....
Please do comment on it.

Reviews

[JENY]

Fantastic….
Writing is the only way of expression…
Where we can be our true self….
All good writers feel so….
And identify with this mode of expression irrespective ups and downs…
Loved it so much…
Keep writing…

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Very intuitive... keep on writing

[heich]

nice..a had a good time reading...

[Candylove.]

The first stanza is absolutely amazing, but overall, a great write! I can definitely relate to this. :)

[x]

Well congratulations of being able to tap into yourself this way and just write down the things that spring to mind. I do so admire this ability of the writers in here because it is something that I have never been able to do so when I see it in another, I am always struck with the candid honesty some are able to express with. I enjoyed your write.
I wish you all the best with your writing and thank you for sharing..

[Cynthia]

Good ^0^