Writing

I wrote what i felt

I'm writing on my own,

Thinking of my past.

I'm drawing on my needs,

Trying to making it out.

I'm finding out the creatures,

To get into the soul.

I'm carrying all the living,

That made you think of the broad.

 

Have been through all the words

Without whom I was nothing,

I brought a panel which

Seems to create something,

I broke all the rules to

Make my way out,

And I know

I have

What I want

Getting to be penned,

I know the layout was wrong

But my thoughts made it right,

I being a human wrote what I thought

And myself posed it to someone who can "See"

 

See the world amazed at me,

See the things being showed at least,

 

I knew what was wrong

The thing made me realised

It was not kept so long…

 

I'm now in a different world

Where I can EXPRESS and

Can made it in "One"

I'm now showing the trueness

Where I can WRITE and

Can show the "Light".

Author's Note

I wrote it just now and wanted to add.
I wrote what just came out of my mind....
Please do comment on it.

Reviews

[JENY]

Fantastic….
Writing is the only way of expression…
Where we can be our true self….
All good writers feel so….
And identify with this mode of expression irrespective ups and downs…
Loved it so much…
Keep writing…

[cindy ellen]

wonderful =) I love it. I think that it takes a lot of courage to write what you truly think then put it out for complete strangers to read. Especially something so raw yet powerful. This is truly noteworthy.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

excellent intimate creation of how you embrace the writing process~ from your heart to the page~ beautiful and honest~

[al25]

Very emtional again. The way you wrote it seems like its your thoughts thats why the ideas arent sequential. This makes the poem even better. Great work.

[ForTheWorld]

i love it...the way you express your feeling the way I felt your presence as the writer...great!!!

[Dream Weaver]

From wat I can see, lots of things pent up
inside. Writing a form of release, helps to
escape all that is wrong....or all that is
right...

[Fran Marie]

there is always much to learn from writing and expressing
oneself thru~ the art of writing/poetry....nice job on this
Thanks for sharing!

[Ashley]

i think some of the best and most true poems are one writen quickly and without thought and this is no exception. i think its quite origional that you have writen it from a writes point if view. well done

[Richard Williams]

Keep on cultivating the unfettered expression, go with what you feel and hone the writing skills; you are on a good track.

[Coyote Poetry]

Took me many years to learn to write for others. The world teaches us many things. A wise person allow the world to keep a distance and think for themselves. I like the last two lines. The poem was outstanding.
Coyote