One Kiss

All I need is one kiss,

To drive me wild,

I promise not to miss,

And it won't be mild.

 

Thinking about my desire,

Makes me lick my lips,

My insides burn like fire,

In desire for your kiss.

 

I'd trace your heart,

With my index finger,

Just don't let me start,

Just don't let me linger.

 

Staring at the star filled sky,

My heart beating too fast,

I swear I might die,

Unless my spell I get to cast.

 

Our lips will Combine,

And feel like ecstacy,

Under stars that shine,

For this to happen I'd love to see.

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

wow :) this is an amazing poem Damon! btw, you spelled "ecstacy" wrong on the 2nd line in the last stanza :) just letting you know! but besides that, GRRRRREAT poem! i loved reading it! the emotions in the poem build throughout the poem and its easy for the reader to feel the emotions practically come to life as we read the words. well done :) i cant wait to read more of your poems and other writings!

[Falling Leaf.]

Beautiful and vivid. Something a lot of us can relate to!

Kindest regards and best of luck,
Savannah

[Morrigan Nicole]

Yes, just one kiss, lovely job.

[Sashalee]

wow. really intimate. i like it

[Ace Of Hearts]

...mmm...

[A.E. Surdam]

Awww. I adored it. It makes me want to lick my lips. Very nice use of descriptions.

[Jessica Marlow]

WOW!!!! ain't that the truth? i love it, it explains just how it feels to desire a kiss, i know i do at times:)