50.Life's momentum, P=mv

Haiku, yet another

 

Life's momentum, P=mv

 

Souls search in darkness

 

Blossoming of self

 

pal

 

Author's Note

Here I am trying to establish purpose of life, why we all here. The first line talks of life a journey. The second links this journey is of soul in darkness and the last one indicates the purpose of our life ..blossoming of self or realization. Peace to all.

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is a lovely poem. It's so deep, and yet still manages to stay within the contraints of a haiku. I love how each line covers something different. The first tells of the basic science that is our lives, the second of the darkness we face searching for our identities, and the last - the realization of who we are. (: Atleast that's how I took it. ^_^ Very inspirational! Great write!

[Summers Under The Old O..]

Interesting. I like the use of the formula, P=mv. Good job, a nice haiku.

Summer

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Well expressed in such few words, searching the darkness to find your self. Good write and the revelation is strong insperation.

[Leran Vakem]

An intersting ppiece this, keep it up.

[George Love]

Nto too shabby, interesting concept

[L.G. Knight]

Intersting concept I thought the Momentum aspect could have been played up more however.... =)

~Frances~

[Kees Kapteyn]

This haiku doesn't really flow for me. I was expecting a graduation of the concept of momentum into the next two lines, but it's not there. The next lines just seem to continue on their own, never picking up that 'momentum'. I'm sorry to be critical, but it is an interesting concept nonetheless.

[jakelsen]

An interesting mixture of the scientific with the metaphysical. I like it. Nice poem with a deep message.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"P=mv" well..it reminds me of my 9th standard's physics class! :)
But a great it is and this equation is adding a great sense in it..Amazing theme and very thoughtful! :)

[Legion]

True. An equation for infinity.

[TamiViolet]

Exceptionally profound haiku. P=mv, I just love equations and formulas, really adds a new dimension to the piece. Colors, font...outstanding. Theme is classic.

Superb!!!