50.Life's momentum, P=mv

Haiku, yet another

 

Life's momentum, P=mv

 

Souls search in darkness

 

Blossoming of self

 

pal

 

Author's Note

Here I am trying to establish purpose of life, why we all here. The first line talks of life a journey. The second links this journey is of soul in darkness and the last one indicates the purpose of our life ..blossoming of self or realization. Peace to all.

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is a lovely poem. It's so deep, and yet still manages to stay within the contraints of a haiku. I love how each line covers something different. The first tells of the basic science that is our lives, the second of the darkness we face searching for our identities, and the last - the realization of who we are. (: Atleast that's how I took it. ^_^ Very inspirational! Great write!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a very nice haiku. It's amazing how much can be said in very few words. Great write!!!

Heather

[Catrinka]

You managed to say quite a bit in just a short amount of words - good work!

[Amanda]

nice write...short, sweet and to the point.

Amanda

[Tamme]

I like haikus. When well written they make the mind work. Although mine just tend to be silly, I like the depth in this.

[TL Boehm]

nicely done. i am a fan of haiku although I rarely write them.

[Jason]

Good job.
simple.

Jason

[LilyGrace]

A nice link between the basic, scientific, and dare I say it, boring banalities of life in the first line, and the blossoming, the growth, the expansion of the soul in the last line is beautifully enunciated in the second line, describing the confusion, the pain and the darkness that we all experience before we truly find ourselves. A good write, well created within the constraints of this Haiku style.
LGD

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

very insteresting...

[MandarinOranges]

I really like this. I find Haiku's rather difficult to write, so kudos for that! Now if only we all could step from the darkness and find ourselves-our true selves! What a nice thought.

Thanks for sharing, pal!

[R J Askew]

I like the notion of souls serching in darkness...I can imagine that. Very evocative. As to purpose...there is no purpose, life just seeks to replicate itself.