50.Life's momentum, P=mv

Haiku, yet another

 

Life's momentum, P=mv

 

Souls search in darkness

 

Blossoming of self

 

pal

 

Author's Note

Here I am trying to establish purpose of life, why we all here. The first line talks of life a journey. The second links this journey is of soul in darkness and the last one indicates the purpose of our life ..blossoming of self or realization. Peace to all.

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is a lovely poem. It's so deep, and yet still manages to stay within the contraints of a haiku. I love how each line covers something different. The first tells of the basic science that is our lives, the second of the darkness we face searching for our identities, and the last - the realization of who we are. (: Atleast that's how I took it. ^_^ Very inspirational! Great write!

[Peaches]

Pal I swear your a philosopher

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sorry it took meso long to review this. I've never been a fan of haikus, mostly because I didnt understand them. But you may have changed my mind. After reading your authors note, I realized you got a point. Great Write!

[Greg the Bard]

I find "Haiku" as general rule something that evokes an image and not a thought. Saying that this Haiku does evoke a thought and it dose it resolutly. Well done. I do not feel an author needs to explain his reason for writing anything. Let your work speak for itself. This Haiku does just that in a loud and clear voise. I like it alot./

[ELii]

Nice imagery. I feel i have had many journeys by your description. I think we never stop searching for this pupose, and have little eurikas on the way.

[Pj]

Thanks for the lil author's note, it certainly deepened what I first understood.
A great poem which expresses so much in so little space :D

[Chillbear Latrigue]

And who doesn't love a good physics formula mixed in with their poetry. I know I do. Not being sarcastic. This was a really clever approach. Good work.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Nicely written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dani California]

I love this. Indeed, yes ... it seems that we learn much while submerged in darkness... going through trials and tribulations... in order to emerge into the light of awareness and truth.

If we did not have any difficulties, we would never dig deeper to find answers for we wouldn't need them.

This is perfect! Wonderful write... thank you!

[Dead Angel]

very beautiful!! i like how u put some physics in there, very creative. its short, sweet and simple. well done pal, very cute and insightful! :D

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

sorry if i seem blunt but a haiku is five seven five, you have a good grasp on your self but not on the laws that regulate words of poetry... sorry it is frustrating