48.Nature on hold

48.Nature on hold

A Poem by pal
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Another haiku

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Meditation

 

A still thoughtless state

 

Nature on hold

 

Pal  

© 2008 pal


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umm... a haiku is five seven five, like the colors of the words

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true and it's this zen that is the core of haiku- use this concept as a template for all the haiku you write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on July 8, 2008
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pal

sofia, Bulgaria



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PAL: That's me, a friend. Socially and mentally matured. A person with positive attitude and take one thing at a time. Neither look back nor worry on future. Prefer meaningful talk with others .. more..

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