44.Missed strokes

Poem n video by Pal. It isn't difficult; Greeting some one 'Good morning'; Say 'Thank you',for favors; Life an experience; Appreciating others; Make it more exciting; Make them, feel good; To feel good; A desire n need; For all, at all times; Yet, always

Missed strokes

It isn’t difficult
Greeting some one
‘Good morning’
Say ‘Thank you’, for favors

Life, an experience
Make it more exciting
Appreciating others
Making them, feel good

To feel good
A desire n need
  For all, at all times
Yet, always missed

Its human nature
To insist from others
Love n affection
 A irresistible urge
‘Need to feel good’

Yet, refuse others
Returning the same
Cause pain, misunderstanding
N mistrust

Fulfilling own obligations
Isn’t, sufficient enough
 Put that extra step
Be, bit more human

  Choose special days
 Of remembrance, birthdays
Marriage anniversaries
  A day, make some one important

 An expression, positive
  To others n cosmic nature
Our reason for existence

 Stop, complain not

What we miss
  But being positive
Recognize others’ n your own worth

  Pal

Poem n video by Pal

81. Missed strokes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMAc9wT4n2w

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I agree with Beautifully Tragic about the 'n' and 'and' bit.

Other than that this is a brilliant write. Appreciation should come naturally to us. But caught in life's troubles we are often too self absorbed and don't stop to smile at a child or when we see a beautiful flower. It's important to let those who are important to us know that they ARE important to us.

Thanks for posting this. I'm sure all of us are going to take something out of this write.


Thanks for the read request.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very true wonderfully written piece. I'm just not sure about the use of "n" as an "and" - I feel it sort of takes away from the piece. Other than that, I enjoyed this.

[Legion]

So true and howdy. :) I like it. Send it around the world. We all need it.