44.Missed strokes

Poem n video by Pal. It isn't difficult; Greeting some one 'Good morning'; Say 'Thank you',for favors; Life an experience; Appreciating others; Make it more exciting; Make them, feel good; To feel good; A desire n need; For all, at all times; Yet, always

Missed strokes

It isn’t difficult
Greeting some one
‘Good morning’
Say ‘Thank you’, for favors

Life, an experience
Make it more exciting
Appreciating others
Making them, feel good

To feel good
A desire n need
  For all, at all times
Yet, always missed

Its human nature
To insist from others
Love n affection
 A irresistible urge
‘Need to feel good’

Yet, refuse others
Returning the same
Cause pain, misunderstanding
N mistrust

Fulfilling own obligations
Isn’t, sufficient enough
 Put that extra step
Be, bit more human

  Choose special days
 Of remembrance, birthdays
Marriage anniversaries
  A day, make some one important

 An expression, positive
  To others n cosmic nature
Our reason for existence

 Stop, complain not

What we miss
  But being positive
Recognize others’ n your own worth

  Pal

Poem n video by Pal

81. Missed strokes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMAc9wT4n2w

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I agree with Beautifully Tragic about the 'n' and 'and' bit.

Other than that this is a brilliant write. Appreciation should come naturally to us. But caught in life's troubles we are often too self absorbed and don't stop to smile at a child or when we see a beautiful flower. It's important to let those who are important to us know that they ARE important to us.

Thanks for posting this. I'm sure all of us are going to take something out of this write.


Thanks for the read request.

[TL Boehm]

well stated truth - I agree with Legion. We need this sent world wide

[Victoria Lee~]

This is really a beautiful "wake up call" ! Thank you for reminding us all to look at the world around around us with fresh eyes and be kind to another.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i really enjoyed the piece ... but i would agree with the others on the use of just a "N"

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very good that is what I like about writerscafe.org. There are many people like you who help us all to be better people. I appreciate the positive reinforcement. Thanks this poem and well done.

[SM Davis]

Pal!!!! this is wonderful!

Fulfilling own obligations
Isn't, sufficient enough
Put that extra step
Be, bit more human


So very true. There are times when the truth is naked and raw, and other times when it is softly whispered. You've whispered this with such grace.

[Jester]

I liked this one! The only thing that I would recommend would be that you go through and check the grammar and things, 'cause there are some small errors.

[George Love]

Very well done!

[Dezaraye]

This is a truly heartfelt piece with many truths. It's very nicely done.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"All you need is love, love, love is all you need." This was a great truth simply put.