44.Missed strokes

Poem n video by Pal. It isn't difficult; Greeting some one 'Good morning'; Say 'Thank you',for favors; Life an experience; Appreciating others; Make it more exciting; Make them, feel good; To feel good; A desire n need; For all, at all times; Yet, always

Missed strokes

It isn’t difficult
Greeting some one
‘Good morning’
Say ‘Thank you’, for favors

Life, an experience
Make it more exciting
Appreciating others
Making them, feel good

To feel good
A desire n need
  For all, at all times
Yet, always missed

Its human nature
To insist from others
Love n affection
 A irresistible urge
‘Need to feel good’

Yet, refuse others
Returning the same
Cause pain, misunderstanding
N mistrust

Fulfilling own obligations
Isn’t, sufficient enough
 Put that extra step
Be, bit more human

  Choose special days
 Of remembrance, birthdays
Marriage anniversaries
  A day, make some one important

 An expression, positive
  To others n cosmic nature
Our reason for existence

 Stop, complain not

What we miss
  But being positive
Recognize others’ n your own worth

  Pal

Poem n video by Pal

81. Missed strokes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMAc9wT4n2w

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I agree with Beautifully Tragic about the 'n' and 'and' bit.

Other than that this is a brilliant write. Appreciation should come naturally to us. But caught in life's troubles we are often too self absorbed and don't stop to smile at a child or when we see a beautiful flower. It's important to let those who are important to us know that they ARE important to us.

Thanks for posting this. I'm sure all of us are going to take something out of this write.


Thanks for the read request.

[Peaches]

I have to agree with most of what is here. It's brilliantly written with plenty of lessons and is very thought provoking.
Thanks for inviting me to read it.

[Dani California]

"Life, an experience
Make it more exciting
Appreciating others
Making them, feel good"


I can see now that I have not been reading you enough..!
Your work is life lessons.. which should be read daily.
I think I'm going to start a collection in my general library of
all of your work to be referred to often. This is outstanding..

Well written, concise and inspiring. Thank you!

[Brianna Brie]

What wonderful food for thought. Being nice to one another is a stroke of love needful for both parties. Lovely words.

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

If only more people did this.

[Karissa.]

Very good lesson on appreciating others and doing small acts to make people's lives a little more... kind I guess you could say.
~Karissa

[Arlene Fleisher]

Very nicely done. Thanks for sending it to me.

[wizthom]

yes i came back why,,to reread a fresh write ,,so inspirational..a good creation does wonders for the emotions ,,I no-longer wonder why God created roses to stand from the rest of the flowers..maybe it's the scent softness of the pebbles..but i often give them as a juster oif affection,,peace wizthom

[Greg the Bard]

Tkhe style is different but effective. I like the flow and the speed. The underlying note is to be human to each other and it is something we all should practise but do not. I do not like the "N's" That is just a fetish and it does not take away from the flow which makes it work well. Wonderful thoughts and great write.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh! This is beautiful, simply beautiful! :)
I mean this is what life is all about, we can't get everything what we want...Very deep piece and it's also conveying such a beautiful message for life..
Also, I loved the formatting and the usage of colors and all!
This will directly go to my favorite list!
Awesome piece of writing! :)

[Rain]

This is a beautiful map to follow for all of man. Great piece. Rain..