wow, i really enjoyed the concept behind this work of insight pal, balancing the vibration,
"don't need reason" showing how destiny has power of all, this awsome poem definitely draws
the reader to ponder, the form and colors worked very well, as well, speaks poetry in the moment, mike
This piece I read twice. Everybody will read this somewhat different, which is no big deal. To me, it's about connecting to other humans and the walls that stop us. When I read it like that, I feel it. Rain..
Well I'll check my birth moment! I realise this is a serious piece and your meaning was not lost on me. People walk past each other in the street, heads bowed...don't talk to me, I might have to answer God forbid...
One question; how did he know the guy's name was John? Just a good guess...I guess?
Cheers,
Helen.
This is so interesting...we do all react to different people in different ways. We are multi faceted human beings. "How you vibrate" that is a great line! I enjoyed this poem. Lydia
PAL:
That's me, a friend. Socially and mentally matured. A person with positive attitude and take one thing at a time. Neither look back nor worry on future. Prefer meaningful talk with others .. more..