22.Return struggle

Poem n Video by pal. Life a journey;Seeking, growing,understanding more;Journey is not outbound;But backward to yourself.

 

Return Struggle

 
Life a journey

Mostly forward

Seeking, growing

Understanding more

 

Interactions outwardly

With all in family

At school, with friends

Work place and elsewhere

 

Mind under constant stimulation

Senses bombarded from outside

Breaking the ego  

Making stronger at times

 

A moment in life

Question all will face

Is the journey taken

In the right direction!

 

Life in itself is big play

Each one takes roles

Without realizing

They are no audiences

 

You are here for yourself

None else traveling along

Others here are mirrors

For seeing yourself

 

Journey is not outbound

But backward to yourself

All worlds are with in you

World outside help you see

 

Return isn’t easy

A great struggle

As if many brakes

Acting at once

 

Senses strike back

Love-blind outer world

Your mind drags you

Linger on sweet memories

 

Ignoring all wise thoughts

Like a stubborn child

Ego will make last attempt

Stopping you at any cost

 

Greatest obstacle to tranquility

Separates individual from unity

With others and within oneself

Subdue Ego, make journey smooth

 

Pal

Poem n video by pal

14.Return struggle

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYqQyXe8DOs

 

Poem by pal. Translation n video by marina, Russia

21.Return struggle (ВОЗВРАЩАТЬСЯ СРАЖАЯСЬ) -in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v7sbbHcfEYQ

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by kamelia, Bulgaria

24.Return struggle (Стремеж за връщане) - in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j_Mdifk4DLI

 

Reviews

[revolution9]

You are here for yourself

None else traveling along

Others here are mirrors

For seeing yourself



Journey is not outbound

But backward to yourself

All worlds are with in you

World outside help you see



Wow ... another amazing read... Loved it especially the lines above!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life certainly has it's ups and downs but it keeps it interesting.. a deep and insightful piece.

[SM Davis]

They say it's not the destination but the journey that really matters. I felt that here. Good job with this one.

[Yaooooooo]

huh, intersting. One thing i wonder is why use the different colors?
Thanks for the request..
One!

[Antony]

Wow Pal, this is very deep in all that is said and so very true, our journey is just that, OUR journey, and everyone around us are mirrors, they are on the same journey, when we look at them we see ourselves and that is when our ego kicks in, our stubborness to say, oh no! I am not like these others, and we let our memories of failure dictate our every move, that is ego. Wonderful insight you have expressed.
Tony

[Tania Leigh]

I really, really like this, Pal....a lot of good insight here.

"Life in itself is big play
Each one takes roles
Without realizing
They are no audiences"

I love it....it's going into my library :-)

[James Watts]

Very well written piece. Great work.

[Dead Angel]

wow! very poetic on life and all its hardships. your words are put to together so beautifully and you send such a powerful message. well done! :)

[Fran Marie]

Very well penned in both form and content~Great write!!~Fran Marie

[Pema Dorje]

Keeping it simple and listen to the language of the Soul where only the Heart can hear ... nicely done, pal