21.Why I am here!

Poem by Pal. Video by Kamelia n mila angelchova, Bulgaria. Many left perplexed; When some one asks; Your purpose please!; Sigh! My god! Who knows!!; Classic questions; everyone muses over; Few struggle lives; Finding answers.

 

Why I am here!

 

Who am I!

Why I am here!

What I do here!

Where I am going!

 

Many left perplexed

When some one asks

Your purpose please!

Sigh! My god! Who knows!!

 

Classic questions

everyone muses over

Few struggle lives

Finding answers

 

Some give up looking

Caught up in routines 

Others get to the roots

Discover their worth

 

Many know clear

Why are they here

For their loved ones

Mother, love or child

 

Some feel its money

Others say it happiness

Few are for all Humans,

 Pets and nature

 

Whatever be you search

Answers are always within

Only in great distress

You move in there

 

Search with mind open

Know you are not alone

Part of something

Stronger and powerful

 

You are a link

Like others are

In a cosmic chain

Make or break Ego decides

 

While drawing its own

Each link gives strength

To others in link with

A symbol of co-existence

Awareness of self

Half the battle

Few hops more end with

“Awareness peak”

 

Pal

 

Poem by Pal n Video by mila angelchova, Bulgaria

01.Why I am here

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yK9spDEUttI

 

Poem by pal n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

03.Why I am here (song-Indian) 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGiD1Y9vDb0

 

34.Why I am here (Почему я здесь!) - in Ruski  Poem by pal. Translation n video by marina, Russia

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DLxsb9enHu8

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

27.Why I am here (Защо съм тук!) - in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGiD1Y9vDb0

 

 

Reviews

[Yvonne Heidt]

Very cool and thought provoking!

Your purpose please!
Sigh! My god! Who knows!!

I pictured standing at Heaven's Gate and being asked that! Either that or a busy airport! I cracked up.

Unfortunately this seems to be me...

Some give up looking
Caught up in routines...

Great job.

[Yaooooooo]

Is not for us to ask, but the answers will come...
One!

[Greg the Bard]

The third sentence "What I do here!" threw me a littlebut the style is wonderful and the color relates well. I would look at a less compact score and more open minded lines. Great work

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Don't know why but for a while after reading this I was caused to reminisce a poem in my head an elderly relative would say when I was a child. A part of that goes ... "Life is real, Life is earnest, But the Grave is not its' goal. Dust to dust and dust returneth, Was not spoken of the soul." ... Best wishes, Bethlynne.
To return to your piece - Your words ... "Whatever be your search Your answers are always within" ... stand out. Best wishes, Bethlynne.

[Antony]

Pal you are so correct in stating that we will always be in search for something, if not then we might as well be dead, we all search for different things in life, some find them and begin the search again, it is our nature to want questions answered and truth be told, you did a great job to express that search continues on with life.
Tony

[Meg Oesterling]

It answers all the questions of the cognitive brain... It's not the typical poem one would see about such a thing, but it is quite interesting. Although the grammatical errors are present, with a little cleaning up, this poem could be truly amazing for both its content and imagery.

[Pema Dorje]

the roads of 'Why' are many and varied as is man. The 'being' of here now as 'I am that I am' is the Heart based realization these roads can lead to ... write on Pal!

[smiggle wiggle]

I like the way you word it and I like the colors you use. Great job!

[Emily B]

This is nice, Pal. May we all find our way through the questions and the eternal searches. Finding answers to the knowledge we seek.

[Fran Marie]

An awesome write nicely presented and well penned ~Fran Marie

[SM Davis]

I love the way you did this one! Awareness Peak is a perfect ending!