17.Woman's Search

Poem n video by pal. Breaking parents'links;Meets lover a partner;A child in her life;Divides her love; Between man adored;And the new born;One to another;She move breaking links.

 

Woman’s search

 

When young and little

Parental love-protection

Elder siblings’ support

All that she seeks

 

She is oppressed

Soft, tender, and weak

Great stress on body

Month after month

 

Breaking parents’ links

Meets lover a partner

Showers all love

Care the man she adore

 

At home and out

A solid worker

Playing always yet

A second fiddle

 

Fights injustice

Protest in frustration

Flags flying high

Marks women liberate!!

 

A child in her life

Change everything

Finds her new role

A mother a creator

 

Blind and lost

Divides her love

Between man adored

And the new born

 

Child little bird like

She loved grows

Strong wings make it fly

Leave her high and dry

 

One to another

She move breaking links

With greater hope

End with broken heart

 

Pal

Poem n video by pal

22.Woman's Search

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RENQNTGvOk

 

Poem by pal. Translation n video by marina,Russia.

39.Woman’s search (Чего ищут женщины) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbrnAfJlCOA

 

 

Reviews

[WildPigUK]

and the circle of life continues... nice write!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

a wonderful piece pal... great flow... and great accompanying video

[Nick Erickson]

Very good. I really enjoyed the flow, broken where it needed to be, dividing her life up in moments of time.
A mother - a creator... the greatest calling in life, the toughest job and most unrewarding. Children do not appreciate their mothers until they are grown with children of their own.
I have a while to go until the empty nest, but my wife is not looking forward to sixteen years from now.
Well written, very good video to go along with it. Excellent choice of music and video.

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That's really sad and heartfelt .. very evocable of emotion. It's a hard time in life when we have to break away, spread our own wings and learn how to fly, but it makes us the strongest people. Best wishes as always, Bethlynne.

[Charlotte Marie]

What a beautifully written poem! The subject is pure and I believe that you captured it with the best words possible! Great job! Charley

Sorry it took so long to review I'm catching up!