17.Woman's Search

Poem n video by pal. Breaking parents'links;Meets lover a partner;A child in her life;Divides her love; Between man adored;And the new born;One to another;She move breaking links.

 

Woman’s search

 

When young and little

Parental love-protection

Elder siblings’ support

All that she seeks

 

She is oppressed

Soft, tender, and weak

Great stress on body

Month after month

 

Breaking parents’ links

Meets lover a partner

Showers all love

Care the man she adore

 

At home and out

A solid worker

Playing always yet

A second fiddle

 

Fights injustice

Protest in frustration

Flags flying high

Marks women liberate!!

 

A child in her life

Change everything

Finds her new role

A mother a creator

 

Blind and lost

Divides her love

Between man adored

And the new born

 

Child little bird like

She loved grows

Strong wings make it fly

Leave her high and dry

 

One to another

She move breaking links

With greater hope

End with broken heart

 

Pal

Poem n video by pal

22.Woman's Search

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RENQNTGvOk

 

Poem by pal. Translation n video by marina,Russia.

39.Woman’s search (Чего ищут женщины) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbrnAfJlCOA

 

 

Reviews

[Catastrophe]

its been said already, no point in me repeating it...but i will anyway...
Great Write

[;]

Great poem...Thank you for entering it in my contest...We'll see how you hold up! Good Luck!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I always said there's nothing like the love of a good woman... nice work in tribute to them.

[Gandré]

no. woman is not liberated. she is the victim of her circumstances. we don't have equality even in the U.S. there is more equality than here in Europe. I agree with Phibby. Moving writing.

[Tania Leigh]

Excellent poem, pal :-)

[Dead Angel]

very moving poem, i enjoyed reading it. :)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very nice poem. I tend to agree that a woman is a liberated as she chooses to be. Thanks for sharing. Debileah

[SM Davis]

Hmm...not sure I agree with Phibby. A woman is as liberated as she wants to be. She attaches to what she chooses and leaves behind that which doesn't suit her. Hopefully anyway. This was really good. No exception, but I got caught on the following...

Child little bird like
She loved grows

Perhaps it's just me. Giving 100% for the concept and read. Lovely my dear.

[Phibby Venable]

A woman is never liberated, she simply liberates what touches her
heart and in her choices finds freedom. I like the way you write.
I love how your passion flies.

[Pema Dorje]

a touching topic of veritable sincerity with your style and singularity, while Woman is Goddess and Natures creator she also is keeper of cultural behavior ... writeous write, pal